Tony Stark (
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2015-05-07 11:50 pm (UTC)
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Yeah, the biggest problem structurally might have been just overcrowding of the narrative.
I'm not familiar with the comics, so I can't really comment on that ball of wax. Maybe just as well.
Well, if it's a rewrite, everyone's in a flexible position :) So what would you be looking to change or to get out of this plot in terms of Bruce?
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I'm not familiar with the comics, so I can't really comment on that ball of wax. Maybe just as well.
Well, if it's a rewrite, everyone's in a flexible position :) So what would you be looking to change or to get out of this plot in terms of Bruce?